I enjoyed the ending. It sets up the rest of the series. Jenn's going from an abductee to willingly entering into a space adventure, but then it takes a sudden turn as soon as she departs... What do I wish I'd done differently? I wish I'd done a more thorough job describing the Nawerssian shuttles so the reader could get a better picture of how helpless/defenseless Jenn & Co. are on the last page of the book.